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Post by zorthrip on Oct 21, 2009 16:19:54 GMT -5
Thanks to everyone for their feedback.
I get what people said about the length, detail, and amount of interactions between people.
The reasons for all of these being the way they are are based on my own personal experience in the dreamscape. I have very short, vague dreams that are more impressions of visions and emotions than a detailed narrative.
Once again thanks for reading my piece and giving feedback.
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Post by zorthrip on Oct 21, 2009 16:14:20 GMT -5
Gratz to the Emmie.
Thanks to everyone who read, voted, and gave feedback.
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Post by zorthrip on Oct 11, 2009 15:07:04 GMT -5
I want in. Yummy, Yummy Orange Box.
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Post by zorthrip on Sept 22, 2009 14:40:59 GMT -5
are they in Buffy?
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 13, 2009 5:26:31 GMT -5
Since people here may not be familiar with a non-Whedonverse crossover, pieces that do this may require a large chunk to be written in the "Author's Notes" section so that the readers know who and what you are writing about, as well as so the can fully understand and appreciate the non-Whedonverse portion.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 3:18:16 GMT -5
I'm on my third translation of Dante's Inferno, taking a class on it in the fall so I don't want to make a fool of myself. Love that book.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 3:11:28 GMT -5
The twist confused me at first, but once I realized what had happened, I really liked it. It was very enjoyable to read.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 3:09:31 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback guys!
Gumgnome, I'm glad you ended up feeling that way. I really hoped that the focus would be on the characters themselves, so I could just drop them in a room together, no questions asked, and let them do their thing.
Thanks again!
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 3:05:50 GMT -5
This one was hilarious. Two awesome minor characters and a great story.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 3:04:41 GMT -5
This one was definitely my favorite. I could definitely see this scene being played out this way. I love that it was dirty and graphic. The stapler and the high heel were definitely great highlights for me.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 3:02:29 GMT -5
I really liked the dialogue between Illyria and Glory. It made me wanna go watch season 5 of Buffy.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 3:01:13 GMT -5
This one was fun to read. I always love hardcore Wesley.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 11, 2009 2:59:08 GMT -5
Thank you to everyone who voted and submitted pieces. I was surprised to win given how well the other pieces were. I wasn't sure how a non-traditional battle would work out, but it seems to have done fine. I do love writing crazy people. Once again, thank you everyone. I so happy! Off to write feedback.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 2, 2009 3:29:31 GMT -5
Now reading Terry Pratchett's Discworld series
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 2, 2009 3:28:36 GMT -5
OMG! This three people using one computer to sign onto SlayAlive thing keeps tricking me into posting under the wrong name.
That post by meliafairy was by me. She actually doesn't care for his work so much.
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Post by zorthrip on Aug 1, 2009 16:39:32 GMT -5
My axe has gone missing. What are all these fingers doing pointing at Evilwillowrocker? You mean he took my axe? Well, I'll show him.
Official Vote: Evilwillowrocker
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Post by zorthrip on Jul 31, 2009 2:57:58 GMT -5
Hey guys. Sorry I took so long to get here.
I'm glad we got us a demon.
I have the strong urge to wield an axe.
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Post by zorthrip on Jul 25, 2009 6:18:34 GMT -5
Count me in
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Post by zorthrip on Jul 25, 2009 6:15:24 GMT -5
I have an awesome idea. I'm gonna have to scam some computer time, though, since mine is has reached final death.
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Post by zorthrip on Jul 15, 2009 6:37:30 GMT -5
Thanks for all the comments.
While I now have a grudge against syllable and word counts fighting one another, luck had a large part in the stanzas fitting properly at the 100 word mark.
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