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Post by buffysmglover on Jun 8, 2008 3:19:44 GMT -5
I walk through a city Of cold Winter air.
Snow flurries fly by Without a care.
By roads and roads I drift like sand, Until I stop In a wonderous new land.
A mile east The colors of Fall.
Pieces of paper Under trees so tall.
By branches and branches I take the run, Breaking free Into the Summer's sun.
Not an ordinary pool A pool of life.
Where heat meets skin Sharp like a knife.
By waters and waters I swim away, Saving myself From a terrible day.
A season so random The brightness of Spring.
Ahead in the blooming A vision so clean.
By eyes and eyes I see you clear, And never again Do I shed a tear.
By eyes and eyes.
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Rachster
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Rachster previousily know as buffyfanforever. :][Mo0:34]
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Post by Rachster on Jun 8, 2008 10:01:06 GMT -5
That was beautiful
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Post by buffysmglover on Jun 8, 2008 13:25:07 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by buffysmglover on Jun 18, 2008 22:08:23 GMT -5
Hey guys, I'd really appreciate some more comments on this one. I think its one of my bests. Comment, rate? Thanks.
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Post by VampSlayer on Jun 19, 2008 11:16:48 GMT -5
Very...awesome!!!!!
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Post by buffysmglover on Jun 19, 2008 12:08:08 GMT -5
Thanks
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