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Post by buffysmglover on Aug 21, 2008 15:33:22 GMT -5
In my dreams or out My thoughts are of him, my sights And they just won't stop coming In the random of the nights. Was he lieing, Or was he trying? Maybe even both, Could be, never know. But when thinking of him Self-control is low.
After sunset As well as before Forgetting him seems Such a chose.
Said that he would call, Knew my hope would fall. Times when I ruin things I wanna keep End with me in bed Unable to sleep.
If I could read minds I would read his first And then my own. Only then could I Interpret the things I'm shown.
With him I only Get what I ask for Nothing else comes cheap. Cuz asking all of what I want Would mean Cutting myself Far too deep.
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Kara
Bad Ass Wicca
boys boys boys
[Mo0:28]
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Post by Kara on Aug 21, 2008 16:44:37 GMT -5
Gah this poem sounds headache-ish. Always thinking of someone would drive me nuts. It's well written though Tim so BRAVO!
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Post by buffysmglover on Aug 21, 2008 16:49:12 GMT -5
Thanks Kara! And yeah, thinking about someone all the time sucks.
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hawkedup
Innocent Bystander
[Mo0:0]
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Post by hawkedup on Aug 21, 2008 19:41:04 GMT -5
Where's the mystery? Where's the deeper unspoken feeling that is so great that no words can describe them properly? It seems so... face value. It feels like something an angst filled teenager would post on their blog.
And you spelled "lying" wrong.
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Harmony
Psychic Link to the PTB
"I can't control it anymore..." [Mo0:0]
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Post by Harmony on Aug 31, 2008 23:51:40 GMT -5
That was really something
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Post by buffysmglover on Aug 31, 2008 23:52:12 GMT -5
It seems so... face value. It feels like something an angst filled teenager would post on their blog. That IS what it is, and that IS what I am. If its too young for you, please don't waste your time reading my posts. I don't write for comments, I write to express my feelings in a way I can understand them. Posting them is for those interested in reading them.
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Iceeh★
Bad Ass Wicca
Also, Angels.
Somewhere, along in the bitterness.[Mo0:7]
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Post by Iceeh★ on Aug 31, 2008 23:53:54 GMT -5
Tim Tim Tim Tim Tim I <3 it and I can relate to it very well You are an awesome possum poem writer!!! <333333333333
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Post by buffysmglover on Sept 1, 2008 1:15:45 GMT -5
haha we have oppusums in trees around here.
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