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Post by Just Willow on Mar 31, 2009 23:30:48 GMT -5
 So, a few days ago i was watching Season 7 again, and i was just sitting there, hating Kennedy and al her stupid brattiness, and i decided to make a Fanfiction that makes Willow not end up with kennedy. So i brought my two favorite characters together: Willow and Faith. It's written during season 7, as if Faith arrived with Giles and the first three Potentials. enjoy! www.fanfiction.net/s/4958909/1/Becasue_I_Am_Empty |
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Post by siredbyspike on Apr 2, 2009 4:49:28 GMT -5
I also loathe Kennedy and wish Willow had never gotten with her in the first place! And i could see how the tension that's always been between Willow and Faith could be turned into sexual tension. . . I'm going to go check this out!
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 2, 2009 21:51:06 GMT -5
Thanks! i don't get a lot of readers...
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Post by Greer on Apr 3, 2009 6:22:50 GMT -5
Yay, no Kennedy! I really like that there's nooooo girlfriendliness going on:) Keep up with it, I'd like to read the rest!
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Post by Secret Scoobie on Apr 4, 2009 7:41:19 GMT -5
Your writing is beautiful! First fanfic I've read in a while, and I've gotta say your dialogue is very buffyesque. Faith's is almost perfect! The story is sweet and very well spaced/planned. I really enjoyed the chemistry you created. Keep going wth it! Tension  I like it. |
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 4, 2009 20:15:12 GMT -5
aww, thanks. *gets all warm and fuzzy inside* you guys are so nice!
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 5, 2009 19:27:37 GMT -5
i don't know. usually i just write until i run out of ideas.
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Post by Secret Scoobie on Apr 5, 2009 21:25:05 GMT -5
excellent  Well I'll kep watching this thread then! |
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 11, 2009 12:40:32 GMT -5
i've added a new chapter if you want to check it out!
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Post by Greer on Apr 11, 2009 13:06:05 GMT -5
I just read it, and I'm loving it! I like the idea of the two of them together, even if they're just close. Plus how Faith coerced Willow into killing a vamp, that was awesome! Keep it up, I'll keep reading.
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 12, 2009 22:51:48 GMT -5
thanks Erica! by the way, new chapter up! this is the chapter where Buffy finds out about Faith's feelings for Willow, and isn't too pleased about it. |
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Post by Greer on Apr 13, 2009 5:56:51 GMT -5
JW, I loved this part. Buffy's losing her temper, as per...always! Keep it up.
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 18, 2009 18:40:02 GMT -5
thanks. i added a new chapter shortly after the one with Buffy's attack on Faith. i'm not sure if you've read it or not. Chapter nine should be up within the next few days!
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Post by Secret Scoobie on Apr 20, 2009 7:51:19 GMT -5
It's really really good!
I loved Andrew's role, you've done really well in keeping inline with the Buffy timeline (mentioning the portal, and then incorporating storyteller!)
Buffy was very...Buffy! And the structure of your dialoge, the reveals and the characterisations are still really good.
A+
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 22, 2009 18:26:56 GMT -5
next chapter's up! (it's really short, but still)
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 27, 2009 21:59:08 GMT -5
Sorry for the double post, but new chapter up!
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Post by iamthewalrus on Apr 28, 2009 3:40:43 GMT -5
this is really good! it's the first fanfic i've actually read, since i'm not really much into fanfic, but i'm enjoying this |
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Post by Just Willow on Apr 28, 2009 14:23:25 GMT -5
glad you're liking it. new chapter up later today!
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Post by Greer on Apr 29, 2009 17:44:21 GMT -5
Nice job!
I really liked how Willow knew that something was the up with Cordy. That was prob my favorite tie-in of everything.
Keep it coming, I love reading it!
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