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Post by Emmie on May 15, 2009 21:39:39 GMT -5
Spike: Great love is wild and passionate and dangerous. It burns and consumes.
Buffy: Until there's nothing left. Love like that doesn't last.
– Seeing Red Fire Back
She is Light that beckons the burn,
He is Darkness, a mystifying seduction;
She is Righteousness, strong and true,
He is Hers, true to only one.
She is Sorrow, heartbreak retreating,
He is Hunger, heart forever seeking;
She rejects and pushes away,
He accepts and steals what may.
Dancing in shadows, yin to the yang,
The Chase leaves them frantic.
As she fell into his Darkness,
So he clawed towards her Light,
Till she sees his light reflected,
Till she feels the love ignited,
Till she reaches out unguarded,
Till the fire burns ever brighter,
Consuming all his darkness,
Burning away his pale mystery;
Leaving memory of love and flame,
Nothing more shall remain.[/b][/center][/i] [/size] |
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Post by PJ on May 17, 2009 15:00:20 GMT -5
very good. had a spuffy theme all the way though. awesome job.  |
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Post by Rebecca on May 17, 2009 15:03:45 GMT -5
Oh wow, Emmie. I got shivers.
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Post by Emmie on May 17, 2009 20:07:39 GMT -5
Thanks guys!
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Post by Just Willow on May 18, 2009 17:16:19 GMT -5
beautiful! i'm not a Spuffy shipper, but that's amazing, i love it!
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Post by Emmie on May 18, 2009 17:31:53 GMT -5
Thanks Just Willow!
And lol to your "I'm watching Shivi" in your sig. That sounds wicked creepy. Maybe "Shivi's Watcher Extraordinaire"...unless you were going for creepy. Hee!
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Post by menomegirl on May 18, 2009 20:53:35 GMT -5
I like that very much, Emmie. Did you post that on your LJ?
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Post by Emmie on May 18, 2009 21:02:00 GMT -5
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Post by menomegirl on May 18, 2009 21:46:26 GMT -5
You did? See what happens when I get busy? I miss all the good stuff.
Hmm, I see "Sad Song in His Heart" was linked but not this poem.
*grumbles*
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Post by Emmie on May 18, 2009 21:58:48 GMT -5
Linked? You mean on Su_Herald? Oh and I fixed that link so that everything I did that day is in the memories link in the post above. Not sure if you saw it before or after I edited.
You've been busy, huh?
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Post by menomegirl on May 18, 2009 22:04:37 GMT -5
Uh huh, on the Herald. I like poetry. There used to be a lot of it written back in the day but not so much now. So I try to link it when I find it,
Yes! I've been uber busy with RL. I haven't even had time to mess with the dreamwidth herald yet.
Re:the writing resource link. When you click on the 'SlayAlive' link I posted to the Herald, it goes right to the writing resource thread. Did you want me to change the link directing people to your livejournal post from last week?
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Post by Just Willow on May 18, 2009 22:05:49 GMT -5
Thanks Just Willow! And lol to your "I'm watching Shivi" in your sig. That sounds wicked creepy. Maybe "Shivi's Watcher Extraordinaire"...unless you were going for creepy. Hee! CBG told me to put that, lol. i'm thinking i should change it to sound less stalkery.... |
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Post by Emmie on May 18, 2009 22:14:24 GMT -5
Re:the writing resource link. When you click on the 'SlayAlive' link I posted to the Herald, it goes right to the writing resource thread. Did you want me to change the link directing people to your livejournal post from last week? I think it's best to go to the thread here on SlayAlive. The LJ post is very unorganized and was more in hopes of collecting. Well, I guess it matters what the link is for - is it to garner more resources (probably best done via my LJ post) or to direct people to the collection of writing resources already collected and organized here at SlayAlive? |
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Post by menomegirl on May 18, 2009 22:49:54 GMT -5
That's actually why I linked them both. I couldn't decide either.
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Post by Secret Scoobie on May 20, 2009 7:09:52 GMT -5
Emmie that was beautiful! Your structure and your rhyme was extremely well executed - both very hard things to pull off, and on top of that your vocab and articulation left nothing to be desire.
You said everything they way it should be sad, and I reeeally enjoyed reading this!
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Post by Emmie on May 20, 2009 12:16:11 GMT -5
Thanks SS! |
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Post by slayersarah on May 25, 2009 19:09:36 GMT -5
that's amazingly beautiful  |
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Post by Emmie on May 25, 2009 21:59:12 GMT -5
Thanks! |
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