Post by Talkie Toaster on Feb 12, 2010 21:14:39 GMT -5
Hi all, just though i would post the first chapter of an original fiction i wrote way back when i was about 15 or 16 years old.
I HOPE that this is the right section to post this.
Please tell me what you think of this guys
and i should be adding more to this later.
Alex awoke with a start to the loud sound of his alarm clock and the smell of beakfast was in the air, "Oh yes! Friday, finally the end to some horror for the week." Alex said as he climbed out of bed.
"You're going to miss out on breakfast if you don't hurry up" his mother yelled up to him
"Don't worry mum, I'll be down in a sec" Alex yelled back down the stairs
"Thank god we don't have to wear a school uniform anymore" he mumbled to himself as he put on his clothes for school and then rushed down the stairs to eat breakfast.
"Ready for school dear" Alex's mother asked him as he ran into the room.
"Yep no worries mum, I don't have to spend an hour in the bathroom like some people" Alex said sarcastically, looking at his sister Hannah who poked her tounge Alex in return.
"Stop it you two" their mother said "Now hurry up and finish your breakfast or you'll both be late for school".
Alex and his sister run out the front door and both made for the front car seat but as always Hannah being the fastest runner in school got there first.
Ezekeen a young wizard-in-training is walking along a shortcut that leads to the academy where he is taught.
The sun had risen a while ago, so Ezekeen found shade from the boiling heat of the sun under a large oak tree and decided to eat his lunch of hard bread and dried strips of meat, after lunch he sat under the Large oaktree stareing into the enchanting twist and tangles of the ancient tree.
"Bye kids see you after school" Alex's mum said as he and his sister exited the car.
"See ya later bro" Hannah calls over her sholder to Alex.
"okay, see ya" Alex says to his sisters back as she ran off to join a large group of chattering girls
"Hey Tom what's happening?" Alex says walking up to a curly haired boy in their usual meeting place.
"Ah, not much, just the usual"
"Cool, so what class have you got first?"
"Math, you?"
"English" Alex sighs
"English huh?" Tom shudders as he imageines his math teacher "At least it's better than math"
"Yeah, I suppose" Alex grinned, Tom's math teacher is the meanest teacher in school
"She is such a bitch!" Tom exclaimed as he saw the grin on his friends face
"Oh well, It's 8:50, I'll see you after class" Alex said, looking at his watch.
In English Alex laid his head out on the table
"English, I hate this class" The substitute teacher started reading a passage from a poem that made no sense to Alex which was probably because he wasn't listening.
"Man, this teacher is so boring" Ales thinks as the teacher drones on in a monotone voice.
Alex laughs to himself "One day, things will be different".
I HOPE that this is the right section to post this.
Please tell me what you think of this guys
and i should be adding more to this later.CHAPTER 1
Alex awoke with a start to the loud sound of his alarm clock and the smell of beakfast was in the air, "Oh yes! Friday, finally the end to some horror for the week." Alex said as he climbed out of bed.
"You're going to miss out on breakfast if you don't hurry up" his mother yelled up to him
"Don't worry mum, I'll be down in a sec" Alex yelled back down the stairs
"Thank god we don't have to wear a school uniform anymore" he mumbled to himself as he put on his clothes for school and then rushed down the stairs to eat breakfast.
"Ready for school dear" Alex's mother asked him as he ran into the room.
"Yep no worries mum, I don't have to spend an hour in the bathroom like some people" Alex said sarcastically, looking at his sister Hannah who poked her tounge Alex in return.
"Stop it you two" their mother said "Now hurry up and finish your breakfast or you'll both be late for school".
Alex and his sister run out the front door and both made for the front car seat but as always Hannah being the fastest runner in school got there first.
* * *
Ezekeen a young wizard-in-training is walking along a shortcut that leads to the academy where he is taught.
The sun had risen a while ago, so Ezekeen found shade from the boiling heat of the sun under a large oak tree and decided to eat his lunch of hard bread and dried strips of meat, after lunch he sat under the Large oaktree stareing into the enchanting twist and tangles of the ancient tree.
* * *
"Bye kids see you after school" Alex's mum said as he and his sister exited the car.
"See ya later bro" Hannah calls over her sholder to Alex.
"okay, see ya" Alex says to his sisters back as she ran off to join a large group of chattering girls
"Hey Tom what's happening?" Alex says walking up to a curly haired boy in their usual meeting place.
"Ah, not much, just the usual"
"Cool, so what class have you got first?"
"Math, you?"
"English" Alex sighs
"English huh?" Tom shudders as he imageines his math teacher "At least it's better than math"
"Yeah, I suppose" Alex grinned, Tom's math teacher is the meanest teacher in school
"She is such a bitch!" Tom exclaimed as he saw the grin on his friends face
"Oh well, It's 8:50, I'll see you after class" Alex said, looking at his watch.
In English Alex laid his head out on the table
"English, I hate this class" The substitute teacher started reading a passage from a poem that made no sense to Alex which was probably because he wasn't listening.
"Man, this teacher is so boring" Ales thinks as the teacher drones on in a monotone voice.
Alex laughs to himself "One day, things will be different".