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Post by buffysmglover on Jul 6, 2008 5:36:11 GMT -5
I NEED TO
Breathe Make my thoughts just leave FIll my lungs with air Know someone will care.
I NEED TO
Try Make my feelings die Think of happiness Yet not imagine bliss.
I NEED TO
Find Obsession of another kind The imaginary DON'T CROSS line A life I'd be glad to call MINE
Short, but has hidden meaning.
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Post by Tyler Austin "tiewashere" on Jul 6, 2008 5:37:20 GMT -5
Wow. I am becoming a big fan of your poetry. It's really pretty. I love it.
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Post by buffysmglover on Jul 6, 2008 5:39:09 GMT -5
Wow. I am becoming a big fan of your poetry. It's really pretty. I love it. Muchas gracias mi amigo.
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Kara
Bad Ass Wicca
boys boys boys
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Post by Kara on Jul 7, 2008 2:29:04 GMT -5
Awesome poem Tim. Like you opened your heart and let us look inside.
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Post by buffysmglover on Jul 7, 2008 2:59:22 GMT -5
Thanks Kara.
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Rachster
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♥Koala Girl♥
Rachster previousily know as buffyfanforever. :][Mo0:34]
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Post by Rachster on Jul 7, 2008 9:48:21 GMT -5
Beautiful as always tim.
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Post by Spike's Slayer on Jul 8, 2008 6:46:27 GMT -5
Its great, Tim!
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Post by buffysmglover on Jul 10, 2008 17:10:23 GMT -5
Thanks again everyone!
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