Post by Emmie on Aug 13, 2008 7:41:15 GMT -5
ESCAPE FROM OLYMPUS
SCENE 1
PANEL 1 - extreme close-up of Wyndam’s bloodshot eyes taped open, pupils shrunk to tiny pinpoints.
Narrator box says “These are your retinas on crackfic…”
PANEL 2 - Wyndam strapped to a chair ala Clockwork Orange, eyelids taped open and the one eye visible is bloodshot, other hidden behind some head bandaging (which will eventually be an eye patch). He has multiple stab wounds from the impaling and looks like shit, very stubbly and messed up. CBG and Tim are in the Conditioning Room preparing an old school projector. CBG is standing by Wyn, touching his shoulder supportively as Tim is positioning the projector.
CBG: Alrighty, Wyndam. Pay attention. Play it, Timboree.
PANEL 3 - showing Wyndam’s zoned out faced, a numbness to his expression. An eerie glow from the projector light is reflected off the wall and back onto Wyndam.
Narrator box says “Man this guy looks messed up!”
PANEL 4 - showing ‘stream of consciousness’ flashing images and phrases from the brainwashing material. Phrases include (resemble this, however it fits in panel):
- No comic spoiler’s in the chatbox
- No swearing, text speak, double posts, flagrant naughtiness or name-calling
- No harassing VIP members
- Don’t PM VIP members
PANEL 5 - Wyndam in same position looking even more haggard, cheeks sunken in and hair greasy and gross, drool coming out of his mouth. Body looks a bit skeletal at the lack of food or water. His appearance is supposed to suggest that he’s halfway towards becoming a zombie. Says at the top of panel “72 hours later…”
Narrator box says “Somebody got hit with the ugly stick…repeatedly…and how!”
PANEL 6 - CBG and Tim watching thru a one-sided mirror control room. Wyndam is sitting faced to the side of their perspective. Perpendicular to them.
Tim: He’s not looking so hot.
CBG: Compared to me, no one else ever looks hot.
Narrator box says: “Phil is pretty hot…”
PANEL 7 - shows Tim moving huffily over to sit on control panel board and accidentally flick a red button.
CBG: Few more hours and he’ll be primed.
Tim: <grinning> I’ll be pumping out his blood in no time.
Narrator box says “Did he just push the…haha wow he’s SMRT.”
PANEL 8 - Back to Wyndam. His face shows a reaction, breaking the numbness. He can hear CBG and Tim talking thru the intercom button Tim accidentally pushed.
Tim (voice over from off-panel): <laughing> You think he believed you about the RPG board? Stupid noobs.
CBG (voice over from off-panel): Noob or not, he’s just a tool. A stubbly Marlboro man of a tool, but still just a tool.
Narrator box says “Season 4 Wesley was awesome.”
PANEL 10 - Following is a string of 4 action panels illustrating Wyndam’s silent movement.
Panel A: Wyndam has a look of horror on his face and is frozen. Sounds of footsteps walking off in the distance.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Stay still. Stay still til they’re gone…
Panel B: Wyndam starts desperately struggling and breaks free of his restraints.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Now move, god dammit….arggggh!
Panel C: Wyndam falls to the floor.
Wyndam’s thought’s: Ow. God I hate falling. So weak…can’t move…
Panel D: Wyndam on the floor, looking defeated with his face turned to the side.
Wyndam: <groans in voice distorted from lack of use and almost too weak to use, show him laboring to speak aloud by making the text shaky and spaced out> Oh god, I’ve gotta get out…
Narrator box underneath panels says “Man this guy whines more than Dawn. Drama queen FTW!”
PANEL 11 - Wyndam stumbling to the door and opening it. It’s unlocked.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Guess those psychos didn’t think I’d wake up and wanna stop playing torture the Noob.
Narrator box says “Guess those psychos thought you were useless. Seems right to me.”
PANEL 12 - Wyndam walking down a modern, dimly lit hallway, leaning heavily on the wall as he is weak from lack of food and water, plus multiple stab wounds and blood loss. Moving on pure adrenaline and fear. Important to depict the location as modern looking to contrast with the latter Slayalive village with its primitive huts and stone cottages. Signs decorate the hallway saying the rules of the forum like above
- No orgies in the cbox WIP (show it crossed off as un-enforcable)
- Stop stealing comic art, bitches!
- No Cussing
- Search before you post
- No Flaming other members!
- Banner size = not so HUGE
- Be nice…or not
- Mods’ Word is Law
Wyndam’s thoughts: Keep walking, stumbling, crawling… whatever just keep moving…
Narrator box says “Will our pseudo-hero escape? Or will he perish? Will we even care?”
PANEL 13 - Wyndam walks by an open doorway of a brightly lit room. Looks inside to see something horrifying, sounds of groaning, growls and snarling leak out into the hallway. Can’t see what’s inside, only the absolute horror and fear on Wyndam’s face.
Wyndam’s thoughts: What are they?!! No no oh god no no please…
PANEL 14 - Room filled with zombies in togas eating corpses. SlayerLV with her guitar from her banner and Tim are among the crowd of feasting zombies. Heck, all the mods are eating it up.
Narrator box says “Coooooooool zombies. Eat the wannabe-hero! Eat him!”
PANEL 15 - Wyndam turns away from the door only to be confronted by the demon monkey from Fray, wearing a collar that says “Joe”.
Wyndam: What the frak?!
Monkey: <dancing and gesturing wildly> Eee eee ooo ah ah ah oo boobs!
Narrator box says “Demon monkey? Can we say Fray rip-off?”
PANEL 16 - Monkey runs off into a darkened room, the door slightly ajar. Wyndam follows him.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Sure, let’s follow the demon monkey. ‘Cause that sounds like a brilliant plan. Oh god, I’m so gonna die.
Narrator box says “Yes idiot, follow the monkey. He’s the wizard to your lame-ass Dorothy.”
PANEL 17 - Through the doorway, Wyndam is inside a janitorial closet exactly like the closet used in Habeas Corpus by Wesley and Lilah where they escaped from the Beast and the W&H building overrun with zombies. See a blurred image of the monkey diving into an small opening in the bottom half of the wall.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Riiiight. Down the rabbit hole I go.
PANELS 18-20 long length-wise panels that are placed side by side, 19 shift slightly below 18, 20 shifted slightly below 19.
PANEL 18 – Long length-wise panel. Wyndam falling through darkness straight down for a really long time.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!
PANEL 19 – Long length-wise panel. Wyndam still sliding down, falling into darkness.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
PANEL 20 – Long length-wise panel. Wyndam still falling.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Seriously?! I’m still falling? Where the hell is the gro -
PANEL 21 – Long horizontal panel that stretches the bottom length of panels 18-20. Wyndam finally falls out of the tunnel and *SPLATS* onto the ground.
Narrator box says “Bwahahahahaha!”
SCENE 2
PANEL 1 - Wyndam’s perspective. Wyndam’s blurry vision makes out two figures standing above him. It’s light out, so the figures look like shadows surrounded by sunlight standing over him.
First voice: Oh my god, it’s Wyn! What happened to him?
Second voice: Who cares? Superior jerk thinks he’s better than us ever since he got the invite to go up the mount. Who’s better now, pancake face?
PANEL 2 - Figures are still blurry and indistinct, but now leaning closer over him.
First voice: He’s hurt really bad. Help me pick him up.
Second voice: Not gonna waste my time, Em. I say good riddance to –
PANEL 3 – Blurry figures now standing closer together, the feminine shaped one standing aggressively in the face of the masculine one.
First voice: Shut up and help me or I swear to God, King, my foot will be so far up your –
Second voice: Okay okay jeez…
PANEL 4 - Still from Wyndam’s perspective, the figures move in even closer as his eyes slowly close on the scene.
Narrator box says “Who was that extremely handsome man helping out the lovely Emmie? I hope he comes back and plays a bigger role in the next issue…”
SCENE 3
PANEL 1 - Three women are hovering over Wyndam lying in a bed, bandaged and clean. But still looking extremely gaunt and greyskinned. Emmie is sitting on the bed next to him, her hand on his forehead looking concerned. Rach and Kara are standing anxiously nearby. Top of panel reads “Two days later…”
Emmie: Thanks for coming to see me. He’s not getting any better. He should be better by now.
Rach: He looks like death. Wyndam-y shaped death.
Kara: I remember him looking way, way hotter than this. Now he’s less with the studly, more with the fugly.
PANEL 2 - Emmie is up from bed and holding an old looking text that says “Healing Spells”.
Emmie: <crying and desperate> Every spell we’ve tried hasn’t worked. He’s on the brink of death and nothing is working. The only thing we haven’t tried is---
Rach: No! We can’t - my mother would kill me!
PANEL 3
Kara: Why not try it? It’s not like we haven’t done worse than that in the cbox every night.
Rach: My mom really hates it when I do naked magic…
Emmie: Rach, please.
PANEL 4 - Wyndam is lying on the floor in a circle of candles in an open room, Emmie Kara and Rach are naked and dancing around the circle. Their long hair is falling strategically covering their bodies where it needs covering.
Kara: Does this candlelight make my ass look big?
Emmie: <hand over mouth, embarrassed at what she says> No bigger than usual – I mean, no of course not. Absolutely not. At all.
PANEL 5 – All three standing over Wyn holding out their hands.
Emmie, Kara and Rach: <chanting in unison> Be healed brother. Saya fal erdito oksum.
PANEL 6 - Emmie, Kara and Rach start to spin in circles as the spin around the greater circle of candles on the floor. A purple smoke begins to rise and curl around Wyndam.
Emmie, Kara and Rach: <chanting> A sa fie, A sa fie! Acum! Acum!
PANEL 7 - Nearly identical to previous panel, but a bright blinding light explodes over Wyndam.
Kara: Did it work? Did it work? Crap my eyes hurt. I’m not doing this again if it didn’t work…did it work?
PANEL 8 - Aloha Joe outside drooling and looking in window, he’s been watching the girls spell.
Aloha Joe (resembles goofy Xander with Hawaiian shirts, shirt says Aloha on it) : <drooling> Whenever I see women doing a spell ... it makes me wanna do a spell by myself.
PANEL 9 - Aloha Joe stands in the doorway of cottage. Wyndam has been moved back to the bed, still unconscious. All 3 women are holding up robes about to get dressed.
Aloha Joe: Evening ladies! Oh don’t get dressed on my account…please. Just wanted to stop by and invite you to the orgy in the Cbox.
Kara: <claps her hands together excited and has an anime smile of joy> Ooooooooo yes! I’m there!
Rach: Me too.
PANEL 10 - Shows Emmie sitting beside Wyn on the bed. As Kara and Rach walk towards the door to meet Joe and leave.
Emmie: <smiling> I’ll stay here guys. But thanks. Now go have more naked fun.
Kara & Rach: Bye, Em!
Narrator box says “Crap I was gone for a few minutes and I missed the naked dancing girls!”
SCENE 4
PANEL 1 - From Wyndam’s perspective, opens his eyes to see Emmie’s face above him.
Emmie: <speaking gently,softly> Hi. You’re gonna be okay. Promise.
Wyndam: Emm…
Emmie: Shhhh don’t talk just yet. You’re still weak. Here drink this. Slowly.
Narrator box says “Wakey wakey, wannabe.”
PANEL 2 - Side view of Wyndam propped up by pillows in a bed. Emmie seated on his side with one foot touching the floor as she leans in close to him. She’s holding a glass in one hand.
Wyndam: What…happened?
Emmie <tears start falling down her face>: You don’t remember? You almost died, Wyn. I – I found you unconscious and bleeding to death. Oh god, you almost died.
Narrator box says “So close! What a tease.”
PANEL 3 - Emmie reaches and touches Wyndam’s face, looking deep into his eyes.
Emmie: <tears still falling> You’re alive. That’s all that matters. And you’re safe. You’re home. <in separate dialogue bubble but same panel, in empassioned lettering> I love you.
PANEL 4 - Emmie leans in to kiss Wyndam.
Narrator box says “Aw that’s sweet. Makes me almost tolerate the wannabe-hero. Almost.”
PANEL 5 - Big banging on the front door. Emmie gets up and leaves the bedroom to answer it. Shows her walking out the door from Wyndam’s perspective.
Emmie: <smiling as she calls over her shoulder> I’ll be right back, my poor pathetic patient o’ love.
PANEL 6 - Wyndam’s eyes close and there is just the red tinged darkness in the panel, when your eyelids are closed but there’s enough light that its not pure black.
Wyndam’s thoughts: Alive – check . Out of hell – check. And I’m home. Safe. Em. I love yo—
Narrator box says “Way to jinx it, Wyndumb.”
PANEL 7 - Shot of Wyndam’s eyes opening in terror. Emmie’s horrific scream covers the panel, the dialogue sound looks slashy and jagged and red.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
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