[one shot] Buffy's Wish

[leonhart17]

I wrote Buffy fic!

Title: Wish
Rating:G-PG
Summary:What if the Powers that Be gave Buffy a wish in return for defeating the First - what would she ask for and how would it affect her friends and their future?

read it here:
leonhart-17.livejournal.com/18522.html#cutid1

let me know if you think I should continue it...

[Mathieu]

Thanks for the fanfic! I really enjoyed reading it. However I disagree with Buffy's choice or at least the way you present it.

She refuses to bring her mom back because she doesn't want to pull her out of heaven like her friends did to her, but she's willing to do that to Tara still? And how come Tara is not in a state of shock after she's brought back? I know that being back with Willow must bring some kind of comfort but being brought back from the dead must be pretty harsh, certainly not a walk in the park. It took Buffy weeks, even months to readjust.

And of course I am not sure about the way the Willow/Kennedy relationship is handled. By the end of season 7 it's pretty clear that they are officially a couple and that they have growing feelings for each other. I don't think Willow would just run back to Tara without having a talk with Kennedy first, not very considerate. Not even considerate toward Kennedy on Buffy's part, for bringing Tara back and making things complicated.

So while I clearly enjoyed the story because you tell what most fans need to hear, I don't think Joss would have told the story that way. But it's not really the point anyway.

[Iceeh★]

Aww... that's like, my dream wish of how the story would go. You even added Katsu!!!

[Greer]

I liked it, it rocked! If only that was the way that it could've really ended...my only suggestion is that you change some of the lines...I can't really see Buffy saying "My pleasure" or Giles calling her "dear one". (Please don't take this criticism in the wrong way...I hate saying stuff like this, I feel mean! lol). But I really enjoyed it....I loved how Satsu was right there and introduced herself to Kennedy. I would just think that Kennedy would be pissed about Tara coming back, since she's a whiny brat. You could totally play that up. I just don't think that she's mature enough to realize what Willow and Tara had, that's all.

Thanks for sharing!