Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo

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Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo Jul 9, 2009 3:30:23 GMT -5

Post by The Muse on Jul 9, 2009 3:30:23 GMT -5

Title: Heartburn Relief For Your Changing Body
Challenge: #2 Villain's POV
Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Characters: Mayor Wilkins, Deputy Mayor Allan Finch
Summary: Mayor Wilkins detects an intruder at his office.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Implied mouse murder.
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters.
Word Count: 100
Author's Note: Sorry Mr. Mouse.

“Allan. We have an intruder.” Mayor Wilkins said through gritted teeth, looking at his Deputy Mayor across his desk.

“We do? Sir, I wasn’t alerted…” Allan replied heading for the door.

Even though he was annoyed, Mayor Wilkins simply smiled.

“Nuh uh uh. Allan, not that way.” The Mayor stated. Allan turned, wondering what was going on.

Wilkins pointed across the room. A lone mouse was standing on its hind legs, sniffing the air.

“Take care of that for me, we don’t need the germs. Oh and Allan? Save the eyeballs would you? They ease the heartburn during my transformation.”

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Secret Scoobie Wise-cracking Sidekick Puts words in word places Shiny![Mo0:32] Posts: 2,702	Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo Jul 9, 2009 5:16:00 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Secret Scoobie on Jul 9, 2009 5:16:00 GMT -5 Haha this one made me laugh! Great job! And ewww about the mouse-eyes... but it certainly fits the mayor's character!
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meliafairy Novice Witch Le Bitch [Mo0:13] Posts: 257	Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo Jul 9, 2009 5:41:30 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by meliafairy on Jul 9, 2009 5:41:30 GMT -5 You had me laughing with this drabble. Love the great characterization of the Mayor. This totally fits him! I could see this being a part of an episode. Great job!
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Skytteflickan88 The Chosen One More awesome than you since 1988 "Can everybody just agree not to trust anybody and you get to the frikkin' point?"[Mo0:11] Posts: 8,757	Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo Jul 9, 2009 6:42:32 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Skytteflickan88 on Jul 9, 2009 6:42:32 GMT -5 Great characterization. I could hear the Mayor's voice when reading.
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zorthrip Common Vampire [Mo0:0] Posts: 98	Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo Jul 10, 2009 4:05:33 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by zorthrip on Jul 10, 2009 4:05:33 GMT -5 I enjoyed this one a lot. It was very in character, and fit him well. It was very fun and true to the mayor's personality.
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Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo Jul 13, 2009 23:26:38 GMT -5

Post by Emmie on Jul 13, 2009 23:26:38 GMT -5

I fail at giving comments on time apparently, but I wanted to say that you really captured the Mayor here. I loved the image of the mouse as an intruder. Your Mayor-voice was perfect and you really captured the mixture of gruesome and wholesomeness that is Richard Wilkins. Great job! A very enjoyable read that made me laugh even as I cringed a bit.

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Challenge #2 - Entry #16 - Heartburn Relief fo' Yo

Post by The Muse on Jul 9, 2009 3:30:23 GMT -5

Post by Secret Scoobie on Jul 9, 2009 5:16:00 GMT -5

Post by meliafairy on Jul 9, 2009 5:41:30 GMT -5

Post by Skytteflickan88 on Jul 9, 2009 6:42:32 GMT -5

Post by Hellbound Hyperion on Jul 9, 2009 7:42:30 GMT -5

Post by zorthrip on Jul 10, 2009 4:05:33 GMT -5

Post by Wyndam on Jul 13, 2009 23:15:31 GMT -5

Post by Emmie on Jul 13, 2009 23:26:38 GMT -5